End of year 1 exam: Learner response

1) Type up your feedback in full (you do not need to write mark/grade if you do not wish to).

more revision, lighting, typography, colour scheme, photos2) Write down how many marks you got for each question against the total number of marks available:

• Q1: 1/1 mark
• Q2: 1/1 mark
• Q3: 1/12 marks
• Q4: 2/8 marks
• Q5: 2/12 marks
• Q6: 2/2 marks
• Q7: 3/6 marks
• Q8: 2/2 marks
• Q9: 3/20 marks
• Q10: 2/20 marks

3) Section B requires you to write extended essays with approximately 20 minutes and 4-5 well-developed paragraphs per question (excluding introduction and conclusion). Count the number of paragraphs you wrote for each exam question in Section B excluding your introduction/conclusion:

• Q9 number of paragraphs: 2
• Q10 number of paragraphs: 3

4) Question 9 was on role models in video games. Read the indicative content (suggested answers) for Question 9 and look at any points you missed out on. Write a new well-developed paragraph that answers the question referring to Lara Croft Go and Kim Kardashian: Hollywood.
in my opinion i think i agree with this as it sss